The charts show the sale of five different kinds of jam from 2009 to 2014.
the charts illustrate the purchases of five different kinds of jams from 2009 to 2014. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that strawberry
jam
was at the top of the comparison over the years.
First of all, in 2009, strawberry jam
started at slightly higher than 3 and continued to increase during the years until reaching 7 by the end of 2014. On the other hand
, plum
Add an article
the plum
jam
had the opposite form of the
strawberry. By far, the beginning was at 2.5 in 2009 but Correct article usage
apply
eventually
it dropped gradually till reaching 0 in 2014.
Add a comma
,eventually
According to
rasperry
Correct your spelling
raspberry
jam
, the purchases of the jam
was
high at first and began to grow Correct subject-verb agreement
were
reaching
5 in 2012 and Change the verb form
to reach
remained
constant from 2012 to 2014. The Wrong verb form
remaining
procure
of the grape Change the form of the verb
procuring
jam
was very low as it was around 0.5. Interestingly, it kept climbing and landed at 4.5 in 2014. The form of the cherry jam
was different. The start was at approximately 2 and increased slightly until reaching 2.5. After that, it declined signifacntly
reaching 2 in 2011. Correct your spelling
significantly
Then
, it rose in 2012 landing on 3 and stayed stable but plummeted again in 2014.Submitted by malak.ayman1 on
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