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Some people believe that the whole family (grandparents, uncles andaunts) bringing up children is better than only parents. What is your opinion?

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It is said that
along with
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parents
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, it is better for whole the family to take part in bringing up
children
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.
While
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 some argue it would be advantageous, I believe it might be very detrimental for
children
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. There are several reasons why it is disavategous. First and foremost, a
child
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 who is grown up by the attendance of the whole family members might be spoiled by getting too much attention.
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, being the centre of attention in the family, would probably make
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 deduction that they are the most important member of the family ;
as a result
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, they feel everything should be provided for them.
for example
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, consider a
child
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 who had grown up in
such
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 as family,
this
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child
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 with high expectations will face different problem in society because they have the same expectations that they had in family and they think society should provide everything for them.
Last
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 but not least, it is better
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parents
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for parents
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 to take the lead in their
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child
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child's
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treatment
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 ,
it is clear that
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 there is an emotional link between
parents
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 and
children
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 ,and all
treatment
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 methods can be implemented sufficiently,owing to the fact that the
children
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 comply more to there
parents
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due to
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 the existing link among them.
Additionally
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, everyone has their own method of treating a
child
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 and some of which is old and outdated for today's society.
For example
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, some
parents
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 used to physically punish their
children
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 and still some grandparents believe in
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 harsh method which would be resulted in bringing up an unconfident
child
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. In conclusion, the attendance of all family members in bringing up
children
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 is unbeneficial and
children
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 in
this
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 situation will be spoiled ,
as well as
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this
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 there will be an interference in
treatment
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 if whole the family take part in
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treatment
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the treatment
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 of the
children
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.
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