Some people believe that the whole family (grandparents, uncles andaunts) bringing up children is better than only parents. What is your opinion?
It is said that
along with
parents
, it is better for whole the family to take part in bringing up children
. While
some argue it would be advantageous, I believe it might be very detrimental for children
.
There are several reasons why it is disavategous. First and foremost, a child
who is grown up by the attendance of the whole family members might be spoiled by getting too much attention. Additionally
, being the centre of attention in the family, would probably make this
deduction that they are the most important member of the family ;as a result
, they feel everything should be provided for them.for example
, consider a child
who had grown up in such
as family, this
child
with high expectations will face different problem in society because they have the same expectations that they had in family and they think society should provide everything for them.
Last
but not least, it is better parents
to take the lead in their Change preposition
for parents
child
Change noun form
child's
treatment
, it is clear that
there is an emotional link between parents
and children
,and all treatment
methods can be implemented sufficiently,owing to the fact that the children
comply more to there parents
due to
the existing link among them.Additionally
, everyone has their own method of treating a child
and some of which is old and outdated for today's society.For example
, some parents
used to physically punish their children
and still some grandparents believe in this
harsh method which would be resulted in bringing up an unconfident child
.
In conclusion, the attendance of all family members in bringing up children
is unbeneficial and children
in this
situation will be spoiled ,as well as
this
there will be an interference in treatment
if whole the family take part in treatment
of the Add an article
the treatment
children
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