Some people think that success in sports depends on physical ability, while others believe that there are more important factors associated with success in sports. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that famous

sport

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players play a crucial role in encouraging more and more people to be physically active in certain sports. Even though some people propound that most successful

sportmen

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sportsmen

can thrive on their achievements

due to

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fitness level of their bodies, others argue that it depends on other factors,

such

as their opportunity, practice, and diet.

While

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I believe that positive attitude and

sport

tactic should be taken into consideration as well. On the one hand, many

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sport

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players who are athletic or masculine are likely to be more successful in their

career

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as they keep their bodies healthy and tough.

For example

, most famous Olympic

atheletes

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athletes

can be noticed that their fitness and physical

apperance

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appearance

are relatively distinct from

an

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ordinary

human

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. To put it simply,

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honing particular

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skills has inevitably paved

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ways they play their games.

Therefore

, the more they have

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physical ability,

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more they earn

great

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reputation and success.

On the other hand

,

whereas

,

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challengers who do not have an ideal physical body are possible to succeed in their professions as well by having suitable practice and a chance  to become a professional.

For instance

, a renowned football legend, Messi, has been regarded as one of the best football players of all time, which makes him exceedingly prominent with his

telent

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talent

and proficiency in every match he plays.

That is

to say, not only physical

strenght

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strength

but

also

techniques utilised in a game

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will help ones reach their limits.

To conclude

,

although

masculine and healthy bodies are necessary for

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sport

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world, other factors should be included, namely opportunity and correct practice or even

nutrient

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diet, and I believe that game tactics and positive outlooks should be taken into consideration.