Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays some

people

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argue that the biggest environmental obstacle is the declining number of

species

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both

plants

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and

animals

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.

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others believe there are other major nature problems.

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the

loss

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of

species

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is important, in my

opinion

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there is a problem in our nature that should be solved that will be discussed in the following essay. Many

people

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might think that the

loss

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of diversity of

plants

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and

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animals

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species

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will lead to several disadvantages. First of all, If the

plants

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are lost from the earth, it would bring a disaster when they do not maintain the

environmant

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environment

. A good example of

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, when companies did

an

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illegal logging

in

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a forest, the land will be drought.

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, the land cannot absorb water from the rain and the water become

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a flood

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flood

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.

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, the government will be blamed by society for the

loss

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of

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animals

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animal

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species

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because it will affect the diversity of

species

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in

the

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nature. Some irresponsible

people

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catch the

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animals

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to sell to

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buyers that will pay catchers

with

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a high price.

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, the government make an institution and arrange rules to preserve some

animals

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that

predicted

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to be disappeared.

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, despite the decreasing number of

species

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is

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important, I think there are some fundamental environmental obstacles that should be considered by society.

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with, the

polution

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pollution

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produced

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by

vehicle

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vehicles

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will

brings

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negative

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a negative

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impact

to

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on

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the air. The use of

fosil

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fossil

fuel

make

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vehicles

to

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produce chemical substances

such

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as

carbo

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carbon

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monoxide, and gas

emmision

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emission

emissions

.

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, when

people

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inhale air, it will absorb those toxin chemical substances and chance

people

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to

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get

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lung disease.

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, many

people

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believe that the

loss

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of

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plants

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species

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will bring

flood

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a flood

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to the

people

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due to

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illegal logging activities, and the Government should be responsible for the

loss

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of animal

species

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.

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, I believe

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air

polution

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pollution

is the biggest problem that

human

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should deal with because it

chance

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many

people

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to

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a

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lung disease.