Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays some

people

argue that the biggest environmental obstacle is the declining number of

species

both

plants

and

animals

.

While

others believe there are other major nature problems.

Although

the

loss

of

species

is important, in my

opinion

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there is a problem in our nature that should be solved that will be discussed in the following essay. Many

people

might think that the

loss

of diversity of

plants

and

animals

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animal

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species

will lead to several disadvantages. First of all, If the

plants

are lost from the earth, it would bring a disaster when they do not maintain the

environmant

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environment

. A good example of

this

, when companies did

an

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illegal logging

in

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a forest, the land will be drought.

As a result

, the land cannot absorb water from the rain and the water become

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a flood

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flood

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.

Moreover

, the government will be blamed by society for the

loss

of

animals

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species

because it will affect the diversity of

species

in

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nature. Some irresponsible

people

catch the

protect

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animals

to sell to

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buyers that will pay catchers

with

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a high price.

Therefore

, the government make an institution and arrange rules to preserve some

animals

that

predicted

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to be disappeared.

On the other hand

, despite the decreasing number of

species

is

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important, I think there are some fundamental environmental obstacles that should be considered by society.

To begin

with, the

polution

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pollution

that

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produced

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is produced

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by

vehicle

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will

brings

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negative

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impact

to

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the air. The use of

fosil

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fossil

fuel

make

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vehicles

to

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produce chemical substances

such

as

carbo

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carbon

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monoxide, and gas

emmision

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emission

emissions

.

Thus

, when

people

inhale air, it will absorb those toxin chemical substances and chance

people

to

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get

a

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lung disease.

To sum up

, many

people

believe that the

loss

of

plants

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species

will bring

flood

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a flood

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to the

people

due to

illegal logging activities, and the Government should be responsible for the

loss

of animal

species

.

However

, I believe

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air

polution

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pollution

is the biggest problem that

human

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humans

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should deal with because it

chance

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many

people

to

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a

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lung disease.