Successful sports professionals can earn a lot of more money than people in other important professions. Some people think that this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Disscuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In the digital era, many prominent

sportsmen

today can make much more

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than other important majors.

However

,

while

some believe that

this

trend is completely unfair to everyone, I agree with those who feel that

this

is justified as they are really talented. On the one hand, many people argued that

sports

professionals earn too much wage. To embark on, other professions like doctors or teachers play a vital role in our social life, but they are not paid as their value. In line with

this

phenomenon, with the low demand for doctors today, life would be more difficult than before. It is universally accepted that humans could live happily without any professional players. Teachers,

for example

, can educate citizens who will be our future life and create the workforce of a country,

whereas

business professionals cannot affect the development of developing countries.

Thus

, successful

sportsmen

perhaps do not have a profound impact on the country.

On the other hand

, I strongly believe that it is fair that the best professionals earn a lot of

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.

First,

sports

are known as the exceptionally competitive major, which means there are very few players who could earn that much salary. What is more, with the increasing of

sports

players, individuals today need to put more effort to improve their fitness and skills in order to compete with thousands of opponents. Cristiano Ronaldo, who is a footballer star, spent most of his childhood time practising football and enhancing his body, which is a compelling example to demonstrate

this

. Another reason is that talents really affect the

sports

career, which means among millions of people engaging in

sports

, there might be only one person who can make millions of dollars.

Thus

,

sportsmen

can earn a high salary

due to

their talent and it is worth it. In conclusion, even though popular

sportsmen

can make

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due to

their talents and effort in time spent, there are other professions that are necessary for our society

such

as doctors.

Therefore

, on balance, my firm conviction is that a lot of

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is created by really talented people.