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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffe and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffe and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given tables display how much two fair trade-labelled products including
coffee
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 and
bananas
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 were bought in 5 nations in Europe in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, there was an upward trend in the sales of both
coffee
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 and
bananas
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 in all 5 areas during the research period, except for those of
bananas
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 in Sweden and Denmark. Regarding the first table, the UK gained the highest
coffee
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 market with a rocketing increase from just 1.5
million
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euros
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 to 20
million
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euros
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 just after 5 years. Switzerland doubled the consumption of
coffee
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, with 3 and 6
million
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euros
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 in 1999 and 2004, correspondingly. Belgium followed the main trend with a slight climb from 1 to 1.7
million
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euros
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 spent on importing
coffee
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. It is worth noticing that the money used for
coffee
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 by the Swedish nearly remained unchanged during the mentioned time.
Bananas
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, as signified in the illustration, witnessed a significant climb in consumption by Switzerland citizens with the number tripling after 5 years from 15 to 47
million
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euros
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.
While
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 UK people spent 5.5 times more on
bananas
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 in 2004 than in 1999, the mentioned type of fruit was favoured by Belgium dwellers with a clear surge from 0.6 to 4
million
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euros
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.
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, there was a decline of half in Sweden and Denmark with a record of around 1
million
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euros
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 in 2004.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, million, euros with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
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