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Dress code or uniforms are important in a company. Do you agree or disagree

#dress #code #uniforms #company
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In Morden ,industries many companies implement wearing
uniforms
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 for their workers.It is increased their unity and save cost in life. What are the important aspects of wearing
uniforms
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 ? Let's see my point of view. Admittedly, the Common
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 code shows up their
company
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's strength.
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 their employees save costs because of not spending money on informal dresses. Every two months once or depending on the
company
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's wishes they provided the
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 for them in case it was dared. It was the main reason to save cost than the washing and drying process
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 consumed. Some people thought it was boring to wear the same colour all the time.
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 they were getting from employers still laziness to wearing. They like to wear a formal
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 code in daily workplaces. Their way of thinking is can feel the freshness if they are wearing colourful dresses.But the problem is an of lot space is occupied for formal
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 in their house
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 as ware board or suitcase.The
company
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dress
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 code does not require anything because they have been getting two or three sets of clothes.
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, Most of the companies did not pay the labours for their
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 allowance. At least they can arrange
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 for their employees. It was a high expense for companies but they must think about it. In end up,
uniforms
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 are the best way to come out of unity. I agreed that it was very useful for every worker in
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 a middle-class family.I strongly recommend that wear the
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 in the
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