Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Several nations have

reach

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global

sports

through

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providing specially designed facilities to hone their best

athletes

, rather than offering athletics equipment for all to use. In

this

essay, I will argue that it is reasonable to train

athletes

with the best tools in

sports

instead

of training everyone.

While

more and more countries are recognized globally because of

sports

, it really matters how these countries prepare their

athletes

. It is critical to invest

with

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the best quality equipment because it helps

athletes

trained

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well and achieve good results.

For instance

, the country can build a wide racing track or a swimming track

that is

similar to the Olympics.

Accordingly

, it helps

athletes

to showcase

that

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outstanding performance

in

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the international stage.

On the other hand

, it is just fair to provide

sports

facilities to everyone.

However

, not everyone can compete globally. First of all,

this

is international

sports

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, and it requires specific and hectic

trainings

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training

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.

Second,

this

kind of event

necessitate

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to train

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training

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a certain group of people

such

as

,

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weightlifters, swimmers, boxers and many more.

Hence

, it is crucial to focus the training

to

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these

athletes

rather than to train just anyone else who

are

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interested in

sports

. To summarise, I believe that anyone can do

sports

but only the finest are qualified to compete internationally. It is more useful to administer fully equipped facilities to the best

athletes

in the country. Indeed, it is a positive development because international

sports

are always a massive

event

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and

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with high expectations.