Do you think it is better for governments to spend money developing public transportation or developing new kinds of cars? Why or why not? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In
this
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think Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
government
should spend more on developing public Add an article
the government
transport
or new kind of car
. From my personal point of view, Fix the agreement mistake
cars
this
is a negative development throughout the country because small
population use public amenities and Correct article usage
a small
money
should be spend
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be spent
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individual
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individuals
household
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However
, public facilities such
as train
and Fix the agreement mistake
trains
taxi
not required much development since Fix the agreement mistake
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minority
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a minority
the minority
citizen
use that amenities. It is Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
such
a waste when every parties
who pay tax Change to a singular noun
party
whereas
only some of them enjoy the benefit. For example
, people who live in Kuala Lumpur did not depend mostly on public transport
, they also
have their own cars.
On the other hand
, if government
want to introduce public Add an article
the government
transport
, they should consider community need as a whole. As not all people live
in the city area required Correct pronoun usage
who live
puclic
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public
transport
or new
brand Correct article usage
a new
car
, it is Change preposition
of car
good
idea for the authority to spend Change the article
a good
money
in
improving facilities Change preposition
on
on
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suburb
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regions
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isolated
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the isolated
such
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of
school and some Change preposition
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of
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students
need to travel to school using Add an article
the students
boat
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a boat
whereas
the government enjoy spending money
in city
.
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the city
To conclude
, I believe that more money
should be spend
on developing Change the verb form
be spent
facilites
rather than focusing on Correct your spelling
facilities
transport
only. It is seems
to be unfair for Change the verb form
seems
executive
that only Add an article
the executive
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upgrade
in Change the verb form
upgrades
urban
area where Add an article
an urban
other
part of Change the wording
another
country
is Add an article
the country
totaly
abandoned.Correct your spelling
totally
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