The table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the average time and money spent at different types of restaurants.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the numbers of expenses in three different types of restaurants based on
time
and price.
Overall
, it can be seen from all the eatery sit-down
restaurant
is the greatest place that
public
Correct article usage
the public
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spend their money and
time
.
According to
the data, in a sit-down
restaurant
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,restaurant
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the price for
lunch
is about $10 and people use their
time
for
lunch
around
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for around
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45
minutes
. Meanwhile, the cost for dinner in
this
outlet
about
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is about
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seventeen dollars and need
time
to stay
approximately
Add a missing verb
is approximately
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one hour.
On the other hand
, based on
time
for
lunch
in a cafeteria people just about 30
minutes
.
However
, in a
fast-food
restaurant
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,restaurant
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most people spend
for
Change preposition
apply
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20
minutes
for
Change preposition
on
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lunch
and
this
is the lowest
time
spend
Wrong verb form
spent
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in all the
restaurant
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
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.
Moreover
,
time
Correct article usage
the time
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for dinner in a Café around 45
minutes
,
while
in a
fast-food
restaurant
just need 20
minutes
. Compare with prices for dinner in the cafe and
fast-food
restaurant
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
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,
café
Correct article usage
a café
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is more expensive than in
fast-food
restaurant
it is about $4.50 higher.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, restaurant, lunch, minutes, fast-food with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The table provides data on
  • average time spent
  • fast-food restaurants
  • diners
  • cafés
  • fine dining establishments
  • average cost per person
  • dining experience
  • comparisons
  • relevant
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