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An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#language #differences #people #nationalities #co-operation
Language is the most important thing in every country. If people start to speak in
one
 dialect only, it would be easy to understand each other.
Also
, it helps to communicate between different countries.
One
 international tongue should be agreeing with everyone and should guarantee that it will continue. In
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 I will complete two points of view. First of all, there are many nationalities and traditions which cannot agree with
this
 statement to speak only
one
 language. Because many people believe that their ancestors fought and survive for their future life and save their ancestry. Actually, it might be strange, but there are many arguments to disagree with the international accent.
This
 idea shows us only the positive side.
Moreover
, after all
this
 practice, people will want to be the strongest in their area.
Then
, it could face
with
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chaos between different nationalities.
On the other hand
, it seems like
this
 idea will save us from any issues. Because
one
 style will connect each country and every person. It is very difficult to change a daily routine only with
one
 tongue. But,
this
 project will compound business and
co-operation
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 which is better to develop every side of the economy. In conclusion, we can clearly see that
the
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international speech will keep us safe and in calmness when it is time to understand. I literally disagree with
this
 statement. It causes
of
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my love,
appreciation
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and appreciation
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 for the country where I live.
Although
, every person is different and unusual to speak personally in 
one
 tongue.
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