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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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due to
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 developing technologies, in the ,f, future there will be
driverless
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vehicles
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such
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 as cars , buses and trucks. I personally believe that the disadvantages of
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 issue outweigh the advantages. there is no question that in many conditions, robots and artificial intelligence will replace humans.
one
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 of them is driving
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 , but in my ,mind it has at least two disadvantages.
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 issue is jobless because when Automobiles will be
driverless
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 they move by themselves and don'
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 need to drive,
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,unemployment will increase and an economic crisis will occur. I don'
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 know anybody who agrees with
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 issue or not.
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 in Norway government has tesla company
vehicles
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 which can move by themselves , after
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 year many drivers were ununemployed creating a crisis for the government of Norwayway.
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 autopilot
vehicles
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 cause increasing accidents because artificial intelligence doesn'
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 have enough ability to recognise many moments of danger thereby the number of casualties and injuries . in ,contrast
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 advantage of without driver transport instruments is passenger enjoyment because nobody will drive and all the passengers can pleasure travelling and extraordinary scenic and don'
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 concern about sleeping during travel. for ,instance a person who uses a
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 car told CNN that he enjoys travelling after buying
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 car. he said during travelling I eat everything and
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 sleep . in conclusion,
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however
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 it makes the trips more enjoyable,
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 increasing danger and jobless, I believe the disadvantages of
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 carrying instruments are more than their advantages.
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