Nuclear technology not only offers a lot of advantages but also threatens the world with its danger. The use of this technology should be discouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Though scientific inventions are always held for people's good it has some negative aspects .Nuclear
technology
is one of the greatest discoveries of
nineteenth
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century,which has plenty of good uses but most nations utilise
this
for worse things like
war
.I completely agree with that
this
technology
should be banned because it has more detrimental effects on the planet than goods. The primary reason why it should not produce again is the
war
between nations.To be precise,
this
kind of weapon
used
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in a
war
,which takes tonnes of
individual's
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life.
For example
,America dropped
nuclear
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weapon
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weapons
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on Japan ,when the second world
war
occurred.Because
of
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,
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redition
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edition
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japan peoples suffer until now.
Therefore
, I think the use of
this
sort of
technology
is restricted by all governments.
Apart from
this
,
this
technology
is quite expensive.
Hence
,all countries can't afford
this
.
That is
why they are always under pressure from other countries who has
a
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nuclear weapon.
However
,by using nuclear
technology
we can produce a huge amount of electricity.
For instance
,Bangladesh is making a nuclear electric plant.Once it is finished our electricity problem will be sorted forever.
Although
,
this
kind of plant is harmful to our environment because it increases our temperature .,Eventually our whole climate might be under threat.Ecologist told that Shundorbon would be highly affected by
this
plant .Because it produces radiation which is harmful to
animal
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animals
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and nature.
This
radiation causes cancer and other diseases. In conclusion, nuclear
technology
might be good for us in a few ways but it is always threatening
to
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our future.Paramountly,I think all governments should avoid
this
technology
and find other solutions.
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