The pie chart show the average household expenditure in a country in 1950 and 2010.

The pie chart show the average household expenditure in a country in 1950 and 2010.
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The assigned pie charts illustrate the information about the average household
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in a nation in 1950 and 2010.
Overall
, it is lucid that, the ratio of housing, food, transportation and others were very different in 1950 from those in 2010. At a fleeting glance, it is crystal clear that
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the biggest chunk was taken by housing with 72.1% in 1950.
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the proportion slightly decreased by 22% in 2010.
Moreover
, health care took the smallest chunk with 24% in the 20th century .
Whereas
, the ratio minimally increased by 4.3% in the 21st century . It was interesting to note that, education remained the same with 6.5% and 6.3% in 1950 and 2010 respectively .
Further
scrutinizing the charts, the second highest production of food was 11.21% in 1950.
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32.0%.
However
, transportation was the lowest production and the ratio was 3.3% in the same year.
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, in 2010, the portion steadily grew
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14%.
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