Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter - suggest how you could help her in her home -say why you would like to do this work -explain when you will and will not be available

#mrs #barrett #woman #lives #town #someone #home #hours #summer #-say #work #-explain

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing

this

letter regarding your advertisement which I saw at the Train station about house help.

To begin

, I would like to say that I am interested in your advertisement because I am a home science student and

also

have 2-year cooking experience as a chef at Grill. I would want to help you with kitchen work.

Secondly

, I am studying in the same occupation so I think it is

also

helpful for me to work, and

as well as

study in the same field.

However

, It is

also

perfect for my regular practice.

Lastly

, As I mentioned that I am a student so I am available on Monday and Saturday from 11 am to 5 pm.

However

, I have full-time availability on Sunday. I hope you reply to me as soon as possible. Best regards Raman

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

142 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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