the government's investment in art's music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extend do you agree with the statement?

often

agued

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that the government should finance public

services

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instead

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of spending its budget on

arts

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,

music

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, and

theatere

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theatre

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i

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agree that

governments

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investments in public

services

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play a very important role ,

ithink

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I think

think

that proper funding of

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arts

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the arts

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sector is

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cruciial

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crucial

for

the

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society. On the

conrtary

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contrary

, the government should definitely allocate a large part of its budget

on

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public

services

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.

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is mainly because

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economic sector determines the

overall

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quality of life, ensuring that some basic

services

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, like schools, hospitals roads, are available to all citizens irrespective of their income or social status .

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, public

services

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satisfy the primary needs of

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society and

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need

a

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proper funding ,

while

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artists and

misician

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musicians

musician

are not

ciuring

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curing

diseases or building houses, so their role is secondary ,

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, any country can live without

music

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concerts , but

absence

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of medicine they will not move a single day or sleep a healthy sound sleep.

moreover

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.

arts

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&

music

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are not waste of money though. since they are an integral part of

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rday

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day

to day life .

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art

andd

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and

muisc

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music

draw people's attention and

very

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necessary steps to pull

peoples

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concerned

in

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to

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any type of social awareness and moral

acitivies

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activities

.

this

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way art serves as a major source

or

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of

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a nations

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nations

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personal and intellectual development.

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,

art

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sector is

also

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important for

the

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society and should not be neglected. in conclusion, though

i

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agree that the authority should allocate a large part of expenditure on

such

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urgent sectors,

but

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it is like a basic need to spend some on

arts

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and

music

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and so on.