Write a letter to you friend describing he/she should get a job rather than getting in a college. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a Job is a good idea for him Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him

Dear Stephen, I have received your letter a few days ago. I am writing back to you on the dilemma you shared in the previous letter on whether to join a college to

pursuit

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pursue

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higher studies or

getting

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get

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a job.

While

pursuing higher studies can look fancy but from a realistic point of view you should look for

an

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apply

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employment in my view.

Firstly

, as per my

understanding

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,understanding

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there is no college in your locality which offers

pristine

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the pristine

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quality education which you are looking for. For pursuing admission to

such

a college, you need to travel to the capital which is far away from your current residence.

Moreover

, living far away from home would not be enjoyable and would cause you additional burdens.

On the other hand

, the surplus income would be really useful for your family since you have two younger siblings as well who are dependent on your parents if you can manage employment easier for you to get recruited in the industries. The location of your house makes it highly convenient as you reside adjacent to an industrial area.

To sum up

, I hope

this

suggestion of a job search than that of higher studies helps you to make the appropriate choice. Lots of love and best wishes in your future endeavours. yours sincerely Sami