Some people argue that the use of animals in medical research for the benefir of humans is acceptable, while others believe that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many medical scientists are in favour that animal testing in the medical field
has
Wrong verb form
having
positive
impact on Add an article
a positive
human's
well-being. Change noun form
human
On the contrary
, animal lovers argue that it is inappropriate. According to
my opinion, while
ethical issues are vital to consider, these kind
of medical lab activities are more advantageous for weak people to increase Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
life
expectancy. This
essay will not only elaborate both
aspects of animal testing but Change preposition
on both
also
my
personal point of view.
To commence with, having a healthier and long Change preposition
on my
life
, most of
Change preposition
apply
the
people are convinced that experiments bring better treatments in the form of drugs to eradicate Correct article usage
apply
the
dreadful diseases. Just because of these lab activities, human beings have Correct article usage
apply
a safe feelings
on Correct the article-noun agreement
a safe feeling
safe feelings
this
planet by doing many research actions firstly
on animals
specially
rabbits, rats, monkeys and many more, because they are having almost Replace the word
especially
same
bones and Correct article usage
the same
other body system
. Change the wording
another body system
other body systems
For instance
, human-society
could have Correct your spelling
human society
saved
from covid-19, a dreadful virus because of intense research done on Add a missing verb
been saved
animals
within six months and the result was covishield vaccinations. However
, before these vaccines
the Add a comma
,vaccines
number of
death rate was at Correct quantifier usage
apply
higher
rate. Apart from it, not only because of these medicines, we are living healthier Add an article
a higher
the higher
lufe
but Correct your spelling
lives
also
expecting long life
for our future generations. Hence
, animals
can be used for human's
welfare.
Change noun form
human
On the other hand
, the advocates of animals
have their own perception for
not killing these creatures because of unethical and unsafe for animal species. First of all, when medical scientists are doing drug or vaccine experiments on these particular species, they Change preposition
of
also
have some kind of pains
as human beings. To be more clear, their actions are full of cruelty causing death in horror, side effects can be seen and permanent disability can Fix the agreement mistake
pain
effect
Correct your spelling
affect
animals
Change noun form
animals'
animal's
life
tenure. More over
, animal rights activists demand Correct your spelling
Moreover
for
more rights from Remove the preposition
apply
united
Correct article usage
the united
nations
Change noun form
nations'
nation's
organisation
to safeguard these innocent Fix the agreement mistake
organisations
animals
rights and Change noun form
animals'
animal's
raising
their voices against Wrong verb form
raise
this
cruelty. Therefore
, this
should stop immediately.
In conclusion, although
animal testing violates the moral ethics and lives of these test subjects, I believe that this
is an alternative to live longer and disease free
Add a hyphen
disease-free
life
by pre-testing medicine experiments on certain animal species.Submitted by maychelle.gayeta on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example