The Table below shows the Number of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Table below shows the Number of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table displays how many people visited Ashdown Museum in the
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prior to and the
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following its refurbishment,
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the pie charts illustrate the responses to surveys of visitor satisfaction during the same two periods.
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, visitor numbers and satisfaction both increased following the refurbishment. There were 74,000 people visiting the museum in the
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before it was refurbished, and
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number climbed significantly to 92,000 in the
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after the refurbishment. Moving on to visitor satisfaction, those who rated their experience as ‘dissatisfied’ made up the greatest proportion of respondents in the
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before the museum was refurbished, at 40%.
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,
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number showed a dramatic decline to only 15% after the improvement. The proportion of respondents who were very dissatisfied with their visit
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fee, to only 5%. The proportions of those who responded ‘satisfied’ and ‘very satisfied’ in comparison, both went up in the
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after modernization, to 40% and 35% respectively, and these were the two most common responses that
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