The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram illustrates how
plastic
bottles
are recycled. Overall
, it is clear that
the process
has nine stages, beginning with people throwing away plastic
bottles
in the rubbish and ending with producing several products by recycling plastic
bottles
.
To begin
the process
, people throw away plastic
bottles
in the recycling rubbish. After that, plastic
bottles
are delivered by truck to a recycling centre for dividing usable bottles
and unusable bottles
are rejected. Next,
plastic
bottles
are pressed as a huge block, then
it is ground by a crushing machine into a container to wash them.
In the next stage of the process
, plastic
pallets are transferred into a machine which makes the plastic
to be smaller form. In the seventh stage, pallets are heated and they become raw materials that are ready to prepare for processing. Then
, all of the raw materials are brought to product processing such
as t-shirts, pencils, food containers and bags and these goods loop into the beginning of the process
again.
The process
is environmentally friendly for the globe, being a closed loop where plastic
could bring to the recycling process
with no pollution and reducing trash area. The diagram demonstrates clearly how to add value to the plastic
bottle which is renewable and also
profitable.Submitted by evetanyaporn on
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