Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many

people

think that art, does not have any benefits to our community and

countries

spend lots of money for nothing when they could spend

this

money on our society.

However

, I have many states

for

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prove that

this

profession has been essential since life started.

Firstly

, the craft has been in our lives since the Stone Age, when our ancestors started to draw pictures on rocks.

In addition

, in our everyday life,

people

have their own professions,

nevertheless

, they spend their free time drawing or painting pictures because most of them recognize that

this

is the best way to get rid of negative energy and reduce stress.

On the other hand

, when

people

calm themselves down in

this

way, they start to be more productive in what they actually do.

Moreover

, some human beings argue that, when they start to listen to music, they are being more efficient in their work.

Secondly

, some

countries

such

as France or Italy etc. increased their annual tourism level with their well-known paintings. In view of the fact that, many decades ago, governments of these

countries

gave the value to the professionalists, that they deserve. Each year plenty of

people

visit these

countries

, waiting in never-ending lines just to see these paintings and examine them from a very close distance.

Additionally

,

this

demand,

also

shows us that, how important the paintings are for humanity. All in all, the reasons and arguments show that

,

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art and music give pleasure to every human being and always welcoming for us.

That is

why, the authority

have

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to spend some amount of money on the trade