The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
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The diagram illustrates how
plastic
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bottles
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are recycled.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the
process
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has nine stages, beginning with people throwing away
plastic
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bottles
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in the rubbish and ending with producing several products by recycling
plastic
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bottles
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.
To begin
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the
process
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, people throw away
plastic
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bottles
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in the recycling rubbish. After that,
plastic
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bottles
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are delivered by truck to a recycling centre for dividing usable
bottles
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and unusable
bottles
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are rejected.
Next,
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plastic
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bottles
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are pressed as a huge block,
then
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it is ground by a crushing machine into a container to wash them. In the next stage of the
process
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,
plastic
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pallets are transferred into a machine which makes the
plastic
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to be smaller form. In the seventh stage, pallets are heated and they become raw materials that are ready to prepare for processing.
Then
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, all of the raw materials are brought to product processing
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as t-shirts, pencils, food containers and bags and these goods loop into the beginning of the
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again. The
process
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is environmentally friendly for the globe, being a closed loop where
plastic
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could bring to the recycling
process
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with no pollution and reducing trash area. The diagram demonstrates clearly how to add value to the
plastic
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bottle which is renewable and
also
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profitable.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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