A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice

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Dear Manoj, How are you? It's been a month since I saw you. I just read your letter about your inconvenience at the new school. Well, try to speak to other students in the class. As you are very attractive and intelligent, everyone will make you their friend. Try to tell them some of the stories you are used to tell me. I'm sure everybody will like them.
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, I have heard a lot about your school. I'd suggest you join some clubs and
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participate in sports activities. I know you are a very good player in badminton, I'm sure you will have a good time by joining these clubs.
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, why don't you spend some time reading books? trust me
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will help you a lot because whenever I feel depressed and alone I will read some books to come out of it. Convey my best wishes to your parents. I'm looking forward to meeting you. Best Regards, Srinivas Varma.
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task achievement
Keep the introduction concise and to the point. While it's good to ask the recipient how they are, try to be more direct with the purpose of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words to connect your ideas better and make your writing more cohesive. Words and phrases like 'Furthermore,' 'In addition,' and 'Also,' can be used more strategically to guide the reader through your suggestions.
task achievement
Although you have shared personal stories and advice, consider adding more detail about how your friend can approach these activities or integrate into the new environment. Provide specific strategies or examples to make your suggestions more actionable.
coherence cohesion
Your closing is well-done, providing a warm ending to your letter. To enhance, you could also include a line looking forward to hearing back from your friend or encouraging them to share their progress.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduce yourself
  • genuine interest
  • rapport
  • like-minded individuals
  • school community
  • volunteer
  • open-minded
  • comfort zone
  • casual setting
  • hobbies and activities
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