Some increasing price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?? What other measures do you think might be effective?
In recent years, environmental pollution and traffic congestion has become increased in many countries. Some people argue that increasing the petrol price is the best way to tackle these problems.
However
, I cannot entirely agree with this
notion, because the best solution which is more effective and accessible is improving the quality of public transport
facilities by the government.
Most society prefers using their vehicles since public transport
has yet to exist in some parts of developing countries. For example
, even though Indonesia's authority has increased gasoline prices, citizens still use their private vehicles since there is no public transportation
in their areas, such
as suburban, rural, and remote areas. So, this
solution is unnecessary, and the problem of air pollution and congestion can not be resolved.
A possible solution for this
issue is providing and improving public transportation
quality. Due to
the number of people who use private transport
having overgrown, the authority should consider improving public transportation
. For instance
, if many communities consider travelling by mass transport
like trains and buses, the rate of polluted air and traffic jams will decrease significantly. As a result
, more energy and money can be saved.
To sum up
, everything that has been stated so far, by increasing petroleum prices, the community cannot entirely reduce jamming and polluted air problems. Hence
, the ministry should provide excellent quality mass transport
as alternative transport
. Also
, people must convert to using those types of transportation
so that we can contribute to solving current issues quickly and effectively.Submitted by rahmad.iriyandi on
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