Some people think that government should be held responsible when problem of homelessness snd unemployment arise.Do you agree or disagree

There is no denying the fact that the main impact of

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it is

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commonly held

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that the authority should support poverty. From my perspective, I strongly believe that the government must consider stricken-scale and aid them financially.

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essay will shed light upon why I believe

this

. On the one hand, the government may need to strengthen poor citizens, so the nations can have a strong

economy

.

For instance

, in the

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region, large masses-scale lays off in several factories in 2019 when

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started,

therefore

,

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of

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folks have become

unemploymnt

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unemployment

and until now the nations suffering from

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a shortage

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shortage

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.

Subsequently

, the electricity rises and most of the

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vanished and

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greatly lowered their

economy

. Indeed,

this

makes it clear that the authority must consider

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economy

and support those individuals in order to rise

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is

economy

.

Moreover

, the

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authority

authorities

may require to empower their citizens and provide them with jobs in order to

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rocketed

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their currency. To illustrate, in a country

such

as Egypt, we can clearly see the effect of starvation, as the

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society

separated into either

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or

lower class

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family

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families

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,

therefore

, the

middle class

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family very rare.

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this

reason, we can clearly notice how their currency went down and several

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suffered.

Thus

, it becomes apparent that the authority must empower their citizens which can strengthen their

economy

. In conclusion, in my opinion, the governance body should assist the masses and provide them with various works.

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is because the nations and the masses can be negatively affected by

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weak

economy

.