You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • say what the problems are • explain how a new fence will solve the problems • suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Susan, I hope you are having a good day. Currently, I am planning to renovate the fence between you and my
houses
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. I can understand
eggs
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price is striking nowadays, and
then
you want to raise
chicken
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in your backyard.
However
, since your little chicken
are
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growing and becoming more energetic, they usually run to my backyard to eat
vegetable
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and fruit that I
plaints
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plants
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due to
a 20 X 60 cm big hole in the fence. I think it
need
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to be
repair
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to avoid your chicken to run in my place and fertilize their eggs in my place.
Thus
, I have asked a
repair man
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to estimate the price. It will cost Cad 250 and 2 days to be done. I hope you can pay
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half of
this
price. I will spend time
to supervise
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the renovation and
do
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the cleaning when it
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done
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. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Best regards, Kathy
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