The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009

The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009
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The pie graph illustrates the change in the percentages of five different types of transport forms (foot, bus, train, car, and other) which European commuting every day in 1959 and 2009.
Overall
, the average distance and duration increased sharply, and travelling by foot was the highest proportion in 1959.
However
, most people used to get to their offices and turn back to a European city turn to choose by car in 2009. There was the highest amount of commuting by foot in 1959, at 55%,
whereas
the same transport mode cut in half percentage at 25% in 2009.
In contrast
, the figure for commuting by car had an opposite pattern, which was at 10% in 1959 and 35% in 2009. The proportion of taking the bus had similar data in 1959 and 2009, at 15% and 13%, respectively.
Also
, the percentage of taking the train had the same figure at 15%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • modes of transport
  • private transport
  • public transport
  • car ownership
  • cycling
  • pedestrian
  • commuter trends
  • urban infrastructure
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental sustainability
  • public policy
  • evolution
  • percentage
  • proportion
  • decade
  • convenience
  • accessibility
  • reliability
  • urban planning
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