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These days people are using the Internet for shopping, work and to communicate with others without the need for face-to-face meetings. Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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It is argued that nowadays people
are preferring
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 the
Internet
 for everything
such
 as shopping, working and communicating with others rather than in-person
meetings
. I believe both have their own advantages and disadvantages. so, I partially agree with the above statement. There are many advantages of using the
internet
. The
Internet
 makes our
life
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 easier.
one
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One
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 of the benefits of using the
internet
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 is avoiding traffic conjunctions. These days, especially in cities public traffic on roads is increasing day by day. so, it became harder to travel from one place to another place.
Therefore
 many people prefer online
meetings
.
Moreover
, the cost of the
internet
 is very cheap and saves time. Let's assume someone wants to talk to his friend
which
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 is away by 4000 miles. If he/she wants to travel there. It costs hundreds of money and time.
However
, face-to-face
meetings
 have their own benefits.
Firstly
, It helps people to a better understand each other. If we spend time physically which is more effective than the
internet
. I personally experience shopping together
in-person
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in person
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 in-store gives a much more social connection than
Internet
 shopping because environment and touch play a vital role in human connections.
In addition
 to that, in the workplace, physical
meetings
 are much more helpful. The reason for
this
 we cannot explain everything online efficiently.
For example
, If you want to explain the situation using the prop. It becomes tough.
To sum up
, Both have their own advantages depending upon the situation the individual has to choose which is the best for him/her.
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Task Response
Make sure to respond fully to the task prompt. Address both the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet for shopping, work, and communication without the need for face-to-face meetings. Provide a clear opinion on whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Organize your ideas more effectively by using clear paragraph structure and linking words. Ensure that the essay flows logically and that each paragraph relates to the overall topic. Additionally, include a stronger conclusion that summarizes the main points of the essay.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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