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the world is quickly running out of fuels. some people believe we should increase the petrol prices to control this issue .do you agree or disagree ?

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In
this
 contemporary world, it is true that people are using fossil fuels like there are ample of them.One school of thought opines that soaring the cost of petrol will control the usage of gas. I firmly disagree with the laid statement and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in
further
 paragraphs.
To begin
 with, there are myriads of reasons supporting my ideology, first and foremost is that rising the amount of petrol or any other gas is not the solution for preserving fossil gas. There should be systematic regulations and all the countries government's should come forward to decide on it before they vanished from the world.
For example
, they can draw a certain regulation or can increase the awareness in people of their respective countries about saving the environment and using environmentally friendly vehicles like electronic cars or bikes. In which both the problems will be solved by it. On the flip side, there is less number of people advocating the opposite viewpoint,
firstly
, it will not be good for the economy of the nation.
However
, by raising the fare of fuels the inflation rate will
also
 increase and the value of the money will decrease and all the essential item fares will rise. Agglomerating all the points, I hereby again favour my opinion that by increasing the rate of petrol, fuel usage will not get in control.
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