some people find it beneficial to send young children to nursery school before they go to primary school. while others think that it is good to keep them with their family. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
contemporary world, it is true that many infants are very talented and skilful from an early age. One
school
of thought opines that it is helpful to send infants to playgroup or preschool before they go to primary
school
;
whereas
, there are certain people advocating the opposite stating that
children
should stay with family rather than go to preschool.
This
essay shall discuss both contradicting statements in
further
paragraphs and a conclusion will be drawn later on.
To begin
with, there is a myriad of reasons supporters of the former view would put
further
,
firstly
children
should be sent to nursery
school
before getting admission to primary
school
as there they can be taught very much of higher studies and it will be helpful for them too. Going to playgroup infants will be able to find it familiar as there will be more
children
like them and it will boost their confidence and learn new skills with each other.
For example
, when an infant is going to nursery
school
it helps them to do some activities and learn new things rather than playing with the family.
On the other hand
, there are certain people supporting the latter view, first and foremost is the attachment of parents and family members to their child and not sending him to playgroup and keeping him with them. It will not help the
children
's development .
For instance
, at home
children
will not be able to learn things which they will be taught in nursery
school
. People
also
think that it is too much for a child and it needs time to understand all of these. Agglomerating all the points, I hereby opine that sending
children
to the playroom is a good idea for their betterment and not just keeping with the family.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nursery school
  • Primary school
  • Socialization
  • Cognitive development
  • Pedagogy
  • Family bonds
  • Tailored education
  • Emotional wellbeing
  • Cultural heritage
  • Educational inequality
  • Early intervention
  • Parental involvement
  • Childcare facilities
  • Readiness for school
  • Holistic development
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