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what are the advantages and disadvantages of globalisation?

#globalisation
The following essay will be discussing the advantages and disadvantages that are linked
around
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globalization
.
Globalization
 describes a process
by
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national
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 and regional economies, societies and cultures have become integrated through the global network of trade, communication, immigration and transportation. Some people say that
globalization
 is beneficial for the cultural and economic development of the world. Indeed,
globalization
 has benefits for the economy.
On the
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 main benefit of
globalization
 for
economy
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the economy
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 is that one company can cooperate with another company on a global scale and increase revenue. An example of
this
,
well known
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companies
such
 as Amazon and Google cooperate globally with other
companies
. That's why the products produced by these
companies
 are sold all over the world. An example of how
globalization
 is useful to the
develop
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 of culture can be given.
For
example
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 if
culture
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the culture
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 of the developed
country
enter
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 the culture of the poor
country
, the developed
country
 will increase significantly.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages of
globalization
are
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is
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 poor working conditions which
occurs
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occur
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 more in developing
countries
 rather than
developed
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in developed
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countries
. Many multinational
companies
 hire workers from other
countries
 for wages. It is useful to the company as their
overall
 costs are lower, their profits will be higher,
however
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 they will have staff which could have
negative
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a negative
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 impact in the long term. Another disadvantage of
globalization
 is that it can create
many
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 unemployment.
Due to
 there
are
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not enough jobs in poor
countries
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,countries
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 the unemployed are moving to other
countries
as a result
 the
country
 is getting poorer.
To conclude
, I believe that
the
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globalization
 has more advantages than disadvantages and I
also
 believe some of the negative aspects of
globalization
 can be controlled.
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