Online courses have been welcomed as a great opportunity by many students, other students see these courses as a poor substitute for classroom teaching. What are the advantages and disadvantages of studying an online course?

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, many students have welcomed online
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as a great opportunity to learn
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some others describe it as a poor substitute for classroom learning.
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schooling offers learners the privilege of learning at a
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which is most convenient for them
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working class
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adults who have a hard
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striking a healthy balance between work and study as online
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channels are open to
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subscribers without
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restrictions. Another point of interest in taking up online
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is that students have access to
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of views from
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tutors and enjoy the privilege of sampling a wide range of opinions on a particular subject thereby broadening their study scope.
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of
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on the internet space are not well structured when measured by the standards set by most governing authorities in different fields of study; unlike the systematic delivery of work schemes which characterizes classroom learning in an organized setting:
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no taskforce available to enforce quality service delivery on the online space. It is
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a big challenge to have an effective
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performance appraisal online because tests conducted on the internet space are not done under strict supervision
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there is a high possibility of students violating examination rules in order to excel. In conclusion,online
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have obvious advantages
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disadvantages but the decision to learn online is made by individuals based on
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-discipline
  • virtual classroom
  • digital literacy
  • e-learning
  • asynchronous/synchronous learning
  • courseware
  • webinar
  • interactive
  • multimedia resources
  • accreditation
  • digital divide
  • pedagogy
  • curriculum
  • MOOC (Massive Open Online Course)
  • blended learning
  • cognitive load
  • peer collaboration
  • learning management system (LMS)
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