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In some contries, more and more people are becoming interestd in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In modern times,
people
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 start being interested in the background of their houses. The main reason is the curiosity of individuals about the secrets that their accommodation may hide and the
owners
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 of houses can ask their
neighborhood
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 and previous
owners
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 about the
house
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. Many
people
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 are curious about the history of their homes. They want to know about previous
owners
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 and what events happened in
this
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 place and whether it is safe to live here.
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,
people
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 worry about ghosts that could appear
due to
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 unhappy situations which happened in their homes and some mysterious situations that recently happened in their residences.
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, in Kazakhstan, a lot of
house
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owners
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 said that they had found out that there were the remains of soldiers under their housing and they noticed strange noises at night.
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, individuals can take interviews
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 neighbours about their residence. If there are any older
people
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 who have been living there for a long time, these elders might know some interesting information.
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,
people
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 who lived there before them may answer their questions and have some data about the circumstances in
this
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house
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.
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, when a young man asked about his
house
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 an old woman was able to reply to all his questions and the man found out that his home was almost 150 years old. In conclusion, individuals search a piece of information about their housing just because of curiosity and they may find a piece of new data
while
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 asking about their
neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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 and previous
owners
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • heritage
  • cultural significance
  • personal connection
  • community narrative
  • emotional attachment
  • historical roots
  • online resources
  • archives
  • real estate
  • property value
  • influence
  • research
  • discover
  • explore
  • narrative
  • investigation
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