The table and charts below give information participants who have entered the Olymics since it began.
The given chart and graph illustrate the gender and
number
of athletes
who have entered the Olympics since they started. The bar chart provides information on the number
of men and women
entering the Olympics, whereas
the line graph shows the number
of participants
.
It is evident from the bar chart that, until 2012, there were always significantly more men entering the Games than women
. In 1924 and 1952, there were hardly any women
entering the Games, yet in 1952 there were over 4,000 male participants
. In 2012, however
, the number
of female athletes
rose significantly to nearly 5,000, only approximately 1,000 lower than male participants
.
The line graph shows a similar trend, with the number
of participants
increasing throughout the century. The most significant increase occurred between 1984 and 2012,
when the Remove the comma
apply
number
of athletes
rose from just over 6,000 to over 10,000 in 2012.
To summarise ,therefore
, since 1924 the number
of athletes
entering the Olympic Games, has increased dramatically. This
is particularly the case for women
, who are now represented in nearly the same numbers as male participants
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