You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the Landlord won't return your deposit. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter • explain why you are writing • ask for the return of your deposit • inform the landlord of possible legal action
Dear Landlord,
I'm writing
this
letter to draw your attention to my refundable deposit
after delivering your apartment
.
I would like to describe to you that I left the apartment
in a good condition. For three years , I didn't have celebrations except
my birthday party. Add the preposition
forexcept
In addition
, I was paying my utility on time. Moreover
, I have painted the door hall and fixed the kitchen key but, I didn't ask for money from you.
I rent my new apartment
and I must pay the first and last
payment as in other contracts. I would be appreciated it if you return my deposit
as soon as possible.
I left the apartment
last
week without my deposit
, I would like to say if you are reluctant to my request regarding my deposit
, I will make a complaint for you and my lawyer will talk to you instead
of me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Sara SeifiSubmitted by saraseifi2016 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite