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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 250 words.

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Some people think that it is the government’s responsibility to pay all course
fees
 for
students
 who intend to study at universities. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
 point of view as it is the government’s duty to take care of citizens ,especially
students
. The purpose of
this
 essay is to discuss why I am inclined to
this
 point of view.
To begin
, it is quite essential for
students
 to be financially supported for many reasons . One of the key reasons is that
students
 can be fully focused on their studies and not work in part-time jobs in order to earn money so they can pay the
fees
 which will result in tiredness and being deprived of sleep.
Furthermore
, transportation, books and other university equipment have been really expensive recently so with the course
fees
students
 will not be able to handle paying all
this
 amount of money.
To sum up
, supporting young people financially to study will make a huge difference in the country’s development.
In other words
,
that is
 going to encourage young adults into being more successful and determined about studying and following their dreams which will definitely result in having loving
students
 who will work to improve and develop their own country. A good example of
this
 is Kuwait where the government pay all course
fees
 for its
students
 and that made young people like to study and invest in the country. In the conclusion,
to sum up
, everything that has been written I would like to reiterate my opinion that the government must help
students
 with their studies specifically with their finance.
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • societal progression
  • innovation
  • economic growth
  • social fabric
  • equal opportunity
  • financial barriers
  • socio-economic background
  • merit-based society
  • financial constraints
  • economic strain
  • government budgets
  • cutbacks
  • critical areas
  • devaluing
  • over-saturation
  • job market
  • public infrastructure
  • private institution
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