In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people

In some part of the world owning a

house

matter as it

decreses

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decreases

stress

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to find a new

place

to rent. From my point of view,

i

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think its always good to be the owner of an

accomadition

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accommodation

because you do not have to spend huge bills for

rent

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fee.

To begin

with,

according to

the fact that in some

coutries

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countries

, for

exampe

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example

, Korea, Japan and chine

its

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nearly impossible to have

own

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your own

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house

.

As a result

of small territories,

huge

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a huge

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number of

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population, owning a

house

in these

countiries

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countries

costs

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an increadibly

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increadibly

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incredibly

much money even though if these countries nations want to buy a

house

they can not make it.

Apperanly

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, because of

this

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these

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realities

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reality

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owning a

house

is not vital. And

also

,

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the population

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population

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populations

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of Japan, Korea and China do not have

other

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any other

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way

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but only renting a

house

. Sometimes, living in one

place

for temporary

occoasions

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occasions

requires much power and time when you change living places every time.

Additionally

, moving from one

place

is stressful and not really comfortable, you do not feel the

place

like your own

place

.

Besides

, you need to worry about

to keep

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clean and

use

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using

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house

items carefully,

other

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ways you may

asked

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to pay extra fees for damaged

stuffs

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stuff

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when you finish your agreements with the owner of

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the houses

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houses

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house

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.

However

, once you buy the

house

for

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forever, you do not

neet

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need

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to think about monthly fees.

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,Instead

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you may have a chance to save your money for the future. You may decorate your own home as you wish which you can not do when you rent a

place

.

To sum up

, personally,

i

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I

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prefer to own places than

reting

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renting

it

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them

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because

i

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can

relex

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relax

when

i'm

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older than thinking about bills.