The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar chart illustrates how visitors from four countries spent their free
time
at the
beach
, reading books, and visiting places in Greece in the year 2019.
Overall
,
while
Chinese and American tourists relaxed by reading books Turkish and Brazilian travellers spent their space-
time
at the
beach
. Guests from China and the US spent their free
time
reading books for almost eight and five
hours
a day respectively,
whereas
the figures for tourists from Turkey and Brazil showed about four
hours
.
In contrast
, a tiny majority of their leisure
time
Chinese and American guests used for relaxing at the
beach
.
In addition
, Turkish and Brazilian visitors were at the
beach
for almost five and six
hours
of their space-
time
respectively.
Moreover
, the fractions for visiting places made up about three
hours
for both American and Turkish tourists, meanwhile, the figures for Chinese travellers represented only 1 hour and visitors from Brazil spent 2
hours
of their
time
for
this
activity.
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