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The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.

The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
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The bar chart illustrates how visitors from four countries spent their free
time
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 at the
beach
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, reading books, and visiting places in Greece in the year 2019.
Overall
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,
while
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 Chinese and American tourists relaxed by reading books Turkish and Brazilian travellers spent their space-
time
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 at the
beach
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. Guests from China and the US spent their free
time
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 reading books for almost eight and five
hours
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 a day respectively,
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 the figures for tourists from Turkey and Brazil showed about four
hours
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.
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, a tiny majority of their leisure
time
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 Chinese and American guests used for relaxing at the
beach
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.
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, Turkish and Brazilian visitors were at the
beach
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 for almost five and six
hours
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 of their space-
time
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 respectively.
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, the fractions for visiting places made up about three
hours
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 for both American and Turkish tourists, meanwhile, the figures for Chinese travellers represented only 1 hour and visitors from Brazil spent 2
hours
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 of their
time
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 for
this
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 activity.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, beach, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average number
  • leisure activities
  • tourists
  • nationalities
  • cultural trends
  • interests
  • vacation
  • influence
  • participation
  • impact
  • weather
  • events
  • festivals
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