Some think that residents should responsible for keeping thier areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
It is often said that inhabitants ought to
responsible
for Add a missing verb
be responsible
hold
their fields unadulterated, meantime others think it is the Change the verb form
holding
goverment's
responsibility. Indeed, all areas must be clean because Correct your spelling
government's
this
is impact
Add an article
the impact
an impact
to
our health so that both Change preposition
apply
goverment
and population Correct your spelling
government
attempts
to situation.
On the one hand, it can be said that residents must be Correct subject-verb agreement
attempt
atention
whole around Correct your spelling
attention
such
as home, park, Correct word choice
and building
building
are beautiful . Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
Nevertheless
true air condition and Add a comma
,Nevertheless
enviroment
are more important for the reason Correct your spelling
environment
this
situation to influence our's health and beauty. Moreover
inhabitantsAdd a comma
,Moreover
are being organize
Change the verb form
are organizing
perfect
around , now many states have voluntary Change the adjective
perfectly
companys
and their work Correct your spelling
companies
is protect
Change the verb form
protects
nature
from rubbish. Meanwhile
most of Add a comma
,Meanwhile
company
produce Add an article
the company
recycling
process and Correct article usage
a recycling
then
litters
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litter
are give
money for reason. Change the verb form
are given
are giving
For
instance
Azerbaijan Add a comma
,instance
country
set up that voluntary group and this
company checking
all areas and Wrong verb form
checked
wanting
Wrong verb form
wanted
conservative
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a conservative
human's
future. Change noun form
human
That is
more important each
person and Change preposition
for each
this
wanting will be widely in the world.
On the other
hand
governments have obligations and it is one Add a comma
,hand
of
around cleaning, Change preposition
apply
also
states must be checking this
action because them
have Change the pronoun
they
power
and money Correct article usage
the power
which
they organize that position. EachCorrect pronoun usage
apply
nations
Change to a singular noun
nation
seen
culture Add the auxiliary verb
saw
have seen
on
Change preposition
in
this
condition so that
improvement governments were wanting Correct word choice
apply
conservation
Correct article usage
the conservation
nature
and give heritage to Change preposition
of nature
next
generation. Correct article usage
the next
Although
every country
do
not Change the verb form
does
that
processAdd a missing verb
have that
Add the comma(s)
, for example,
for example
Pakistan country
is unclean and untidy another example is the country
of Pakistan have
the biggest city which Correct subject-verb agreement
has
this
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
city
more popular but bad action.
In conclusion, I would maintain that Correct article usage
a city
this
situation responsible
Add a missing verb
is responsible
both
residents and Change preposition
for both
goverments
owning to Correct your spelling
governments
government
nature
is
us and Change the verb form
are
conservation
all resources. Replace the word
conserving
Thus
nature
resources and Correct your spelling
environments
environment
enviroments
Correct your spelling
environments
significant
Add a missing verb
are significant
each
person and I will hope next Change preposition
to each
years
Fix the agreement mistake
year
that
positions must be more popular Correct pronoun usage
those
for
humanChange preposition
among
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