Some think that residents should responsible for keeping thier areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

It is often said that inhabitants ought to
responsible
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for
hold
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their fields unadulterated, meantime others think it is the
goverment's
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government's
responsibility. Indeed, all areas must be clean because
this
is
impact
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the impact
an impact
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to
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apply
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our health so that both
goverment
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government
and population
attempts
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attempt
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to situation. On the one hand, it can be said that residents must be
atention
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attention
whole around
such
as home, park,
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and building
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building
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buildings
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are beautiful .
Nevertheless
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true air condition and
enviroment
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environment
are more important for the reason
this
situation to influence our's health and beauty.
Moreover
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inhabitants
are being organize
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are organizing
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perfect
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perfectly
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around , now many states have voluntary
companys
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companies
and their work
is protect
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protects
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nature
from rubbish.
Meanwhile
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most of
company
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the company
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produce
recycling
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process and
then
litters
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litter
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are give
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are given
are giving
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money for reason.
For
instance
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,instance
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Azerbaijan
country
set up that voluntary group and
this
company
checking
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checked
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all areas and
wanting
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wanted
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conservative
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a conservative
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human's
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future.
That is
more important
each
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for each
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person and
this
wanting will be widely in the world.
On the other
hand
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,hand
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governments have obligations and it is one
of
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apply
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around cleaning,
also
states must be checking
this
action because
them
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they
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have
power
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the power
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and money
which
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apply
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they organize that position. Each
nations
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nation
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seen
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saw
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culture
on
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in
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this
condition so
that
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apply
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improvement governments were wanting
conservation
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the conservation
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nature
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of nature
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and give heritage to
next
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the next
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generation.
Although
every
country
do
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not
that
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have that
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process
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, for example,
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for example
Pakistan
country
is unclean and untidy another example is the
country
of Pakistan
have
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has
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the biggest city which
this
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apply
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is
city
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a city
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more popular but bad action. In conclusion, I would maintain that
this
situation
responsible
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is responsible
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both
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for both
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residents and
goverments
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governments
government
owning to
nature
is
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are
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us and
conservation
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conserving
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all resources.
Thus
nature
resources and
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environments
environment
enviroments
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environments
significant
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are significant
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each
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to each
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person and I will hope next
years
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year
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that
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those
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positions must be more popular
for
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among
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human
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