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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

#plans #show #site #airport #redevelopment #year
The plans illustrate the latest
airplane
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 site and the refurbished aircraft next
year
.
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, the airport
initially
 has four facilities, within one
year
, the aircraft areas
such
 as
departure
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the departure
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 building, arrival building
as well as
 gates will be expanded and added three more utilities. First of all, the gates will be escalated to eighteen from originally eight units. Every passenger will gain more comfortable utility, they do not no longer
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to
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walk because the walkways will be replaced by sky
train
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trains
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.
Moreover
,
shopping
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center
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 will be brought right into the pathway in front of the gate’s entrance.
However
, inside
of
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the departure terminal that recently comprise just only check-in station and coffee shop,
but
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people will gain more
convenient
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due to
additional
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the additional
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 construction of the bag drop spot next
year
.
Furthermore
, the arrival side
,
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 is now empty with zero
facility
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facilities
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 yet
the
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apply
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following
this
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apply
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year
 the area will be improved by parking lots
along with
 increasing of many facilities which are
café
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a café
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 and
ATM
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ATMs
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.
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  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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