There are some problems in the changing room in your sport center. Write a letter to the sport center manager. In your letter, you should: - Describe the problems in the changing room - Explain why the sport center is important for you - Suggest what the manager should do.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter in order to bring your attention to the arising problems we are facing in the changing room of our sports centre.

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with, I would like to emphasize the serious problem of water leakage in the lavatory

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. The water keeps on leaking and the whole nearby

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is getting affected by it.

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, the constant outflow is causing fungus in some parts.

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due to

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the lack of sunlight in

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the humidity caused by leakage doesn't get dried out and

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it is causing rust on the pipes.

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, the centre has its own benefits in our lives, by constant exercising and sports playing it helps us to maintain a healthy lifestyle. Sports centres play a vital role in one's life,

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, they allow you to play a variety of competitive games and provide resources needed for exercising throughout the year.

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, I am looking forward that prompt actions will be taken from the management side in order to prevent any leakages in the

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. Yours faithfully, Sana Rizvi.

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