Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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The most effective solution for growing traffic and pollution is raising the cost of
fuel
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.
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, I totally disagree with
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statement for some reasons. First of all, petrol is mainly used for
cars
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and public
transport
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which are demanded by
people
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. It means that despite the raising cost individuals will not stop using vehicles. Since
people
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use private
cars
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for getting to their workplaces the high
prices
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cannot prevent them from driving
cars
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and turning to public
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.
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public
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being inconvenient
people
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prefer using their own
cars
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.
As a result
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, drivers will not stop polluting and creating traffic problems with their vehicles.
For instance
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, imagine a situation where one family is going on a trip to the mountains. Obviously,
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family will use their own car in order to reach their destination even if the price of
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would be extremely high.
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, the used car will pollute the air during the whole road.
Secondly
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, increasing the price of petrol will bring negative consequences. One point is that with hiking
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costs other
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of different products will increase
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.
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, the service of lorries will raise and it will touch the value of goods since they are delivered by trucks. Another consequence is that high
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might touch both government's economy and individuals' budgets. If petrol is expensive
people
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will spend more money and require a boost in their salary. Evidently, it is not beneficial for the government. Since the government has its own plans to spend money it will slow down the development.
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, all of these disadvantages cannot stop humans from using
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and they will continue to pollute our air and make traffic problems.
To conclude
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, increasing the price of
fuel
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cannot prevent
people
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from using
cars
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regardless of disadvantages
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as high
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of goods.
In addition
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, because of the inconvenience of public
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humans will continue driving their own vehicle creating traffics and polluting the air.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discourage
  • incentivize
  • environmentally friendly
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • pollutants
  • alternative energy sources
  • sustainable economy
  • disproportionately affect
  • daily commuting
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • comprehensive solutions
  • public transportation systems
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