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The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015.

The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015.
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The line graph illustrates the worldwide demand for a variety of textile fibres, namely cellulose, wool, cotton and
polyester
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 from 1980 to 2015.
Overall
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, there was an increase in the demand for all surveyed fibres, with
polyester
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 witnessing the most dramatic rise.
In addition
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, wool and cellulose followed the same pattern throughout the period. In 1980, about 12
tons
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 of cotton were consumed, with mild fluctuations in some years later and reached roughly 50
tons
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 in 2015. The figure for
polyester
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 recorded a stable increase, rising by approximately 40
tons
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 to 52
tons
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 of
polyester
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 between 1980 and 2015. The demand for wool started at 5
tons
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, after which it saw a consistent increase to nearly 15
tons
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at the end
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 of the given period. The figure for cellulose saw similar changes in the first half of the period, growing from 2
tons
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 in 1990 to 8
tons
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 in 2010, but from 2010 onwards
this
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 category dropped slightly to 5
tons
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words polyester, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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