You stayed at your friends' house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia.You left a file with important documents in your room. write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him to return it to you by post.

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Dear Mike, Good day. Hope you are doing well. I would like to inform you that I forgot a bunch of documents in the room, in which I stayed in your beautiful house. As I said, during my one-week official trip to attend a business seminar in Australia, it was a fantastic journey and the accommodation which I got is really awesome. It was one of the best moments in my life when I used to stay with my family. Indeed, I cannot ignore the time I have spent with you.

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, the house faces towards the beach view is really astonishing.

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, I cannot Ignore the evening time that I could sense a cool breeze from the sea once I came back from the seminar. By the way, I want to say that I forgot the file, which is covered with a blue colour cover, which was next to the wardrobe in the bedroom. The file is very important to me and some official documents are in it. Kindly courier those blue covers to my office address, which is hosted in Calgary, Canada. Hope you will do

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for me as early as possible. Let's meet soon at my home. Best wishes, Ravi.

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