You have recently moved to a new home. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit.

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Dear Mary, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and best spirits. I'm just writing to give you a piece of joyous news.

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morning, we moved to our newly-built house, and I'd be so delighted if you could come to celebrate with us our new accommodation. Actually, my husband and I've been building our dream home for more than 2 years. After the construction

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had been completed a month ago, we decided to relocate and stay there as it's only a 5-minute walk from his current job, and at the same time, to enjoy the wide variety of facilities available in the city centre. I'm so excited to let you know that

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house is much more spacious than our old apartment. It's got about 3 floors with a wide garden in front of it, and there's a backyard for kiddos to cheer themselves up. What's more, not only do the bedrooms have got ensuite bathrooms, but

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they look over the garden. Anyway, if you won't be doing anything else, you can come over and visit me around the end of March in the new home. Of course, you'll be staying with me as I'll prepare the guest room for you.

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to that, I'm planning to pick you up at the airport once you arrive. Hope you'll be able to make it, and can't wait to see you

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. Lots of love, Laila

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

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You have recently moved to a new home. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit.

Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, wave and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people think that governments should do more to make their citizens eat a healthy diet. Others believe that individuals must take responsibility for their own diet and health. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that finding a job satisfaction is considered the most important thing for the young generation nowadays. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly pepole.