It is now possible to order almost any item over the internet and have it delivered to one's home, As a result, people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits.

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Recently, Online shopping has become a regular thing
due to
the increasing usage of the internet. Some believe as online purchasing has become convenient over the web, which is why
people
become impatient and careless in their purchasing behaviour. I agree with the statement. In the
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I will discuss how flash sales can make
people
purchase old
products
. A lot of online sellers offer flash sales to clear all the earliest inventory, which may contain a huge amount of bad
products
.
This
gives a big discount to
people
,
although
they buy a lot of unnecessary and low-grade
products
without even thinking.
For instance
, Daraz is an online platform, where
people
often buy defective
products
from large discount sales without any knowledge.
Thus
,
people
have been losing patience with online platforms' lucrative offers. Many online sites masquerading as information sites try to create a need for
people
, that they do not need, To elaborate, they persuade
people
to purchase unnecessary
as well as
sometimes low-quality things. Sometimes
people
do not require some
products
;
however
, they buy them only from being influenced by those sellers.
For example
, a website selling low-grade speakers portrays the speaker as one of the finest ones in the market at a very low cost. Any gadget freak would instantly purchase that without any research.
Therefore
, by showing attractive
products
they are breaking the carefulness among the consumer.
To conclude
, since virtual purchasing is making everything effortless, I believe that
people
often spend money without any tolerance and attention, as online seller tries to offer many lucrative offers
as well as
tries to persuade the consumer into buying things.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • online shopping
  • delivery
  • patience
  • carefulness
  • shopping habits
  • value
  • individual
  • preferences
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