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Having a lot of international sports events may promote world peace.To what extent do you agree ar disagree?

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The majority of
people
 believe that
events
 like
World
Cup
 will bring
peace
 to the
world
while
 some think that
this
 is a myth and that
world
peace
 is not related to
world
 championships. I strongly agree with the notion
due to
 creating strong boundaries between different cultures and sharing lung the same interests. A number of
people
 believe that
people
 can have better social boundaries by having
events
such
 as
World
Cup
. In another
world
, when gathering in the same place for something like
World
Cup
 they trying communicate with each other so creating many different relationships with other
people
 from foreign countries . 2023
World
Cup
for example
 when a lot of
people
 came to Qatar it was a good opportunity to create new friendships with other
people
 from different countries. In ,addition to making a stronger social ,boundary I do believe that big
sports
events
 can bring
this
 opportunity for
people
 to communicate with each other I believe these
events
 mitigate the impacts of race in the
world
. In
sports
 ,champion
people
 feel that are equal to others so it
this
 easier for them to connect with other
people
. Some may claim that big
sports
events
 do not have any effect on
world
peace
 and big
sports
events
 are just a show to fill
people
's leisure time and
world
peace
 is made by other activities,
this
 view is just not be overlooked because these big
events
 are a new way of communicating between different cultures. In conclusion, a number of
people
 and I strongly believe that big
sports
events
 bring
peace
 to the
world
while
 some may claim
this
 is just a myth.
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