some people think that , prisoners should be made to do the communuity work instead of put them behind the bars. what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by

some

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that, culprits should do

the

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community

work, without payment rather than sitting in the bars. I completely

agree

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onagree

toagree

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this

statement. In the following

essay

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i

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I

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will explain some reasons with examples.

Firstly

, cleaning the

community

will help them to change their

behavior

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behaviour

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.

For example

, if the person

ready

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is ready

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to do work,

then

he

understand

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understands

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and

realize

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the

harwork

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artwork

hard work

behind it. And

also

government should pass some rules to

prisioners

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prisoners

like how much area

you

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they

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will cover to clean, if you clean more area,

then

the prison time will

be reduce

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.

Moreover

,

this

kind of activity will help keep the

community

clean and tidy.

On the other hand

, it helps them to reduce the crime rate. If the person walks around the

community

while

doing work, everyone has got to know the person, who did

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the crimes

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crimes

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crime

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. And people will be aware of him whenever they saw in public places. And when the prisoner saw his family and relatives, he felt ashamed and probably never did

this crimes

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again.

Furthermore

,

this

type of

activitiy

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activity

may help them to stay away from bars and keep more conscious

in

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about

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their health. Because these culprits

are

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spend their time in

the

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bars. Drinking alcohol leads to cancer and other serious health issues. In

india

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India

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, some prisoners

caught

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i

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I

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,

some

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and some

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crimes

such

as bank robberies ,

snatching

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and snatching

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, had

alloted

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allowed

allotted

allocated

by

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apply

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some works as

a

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punishment

such

as cleaning the surroundings, roads ,parks, and beaches in summer. In conclusion, doing

community

works

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work

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by

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prisioners

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prisoners

is the best thing . It helps to clean the

community

, decrease the crime rate, change their behaviour and make them healthy.