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The bar chart below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different school in four country in 2001.

The bar chart below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different school in four country in 2001.
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The given bar chart represents the total amount of time each educator spent instructing in various schools across four nations (
Japan
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,
Spain
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,
Iceland
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,
USA
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) in the year 2001.
Overall
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, it can be seen as the older the students, the more
hours
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 are needed in teaching them. For primary education, the hour teacher is around 600 in
Japan
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,
Spain
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 and
Iceland
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.
However
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, the was a rise of almost 150
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 spent in the
USA
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.
Then
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, lower secondary in
Japan
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 only took around 620
hours
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 above their primary same as
Iceland
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 which was 600.
Spain
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 secondary's educators spent 750
hours
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whereas
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 the
USA
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 spent the most
hours
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 which is almost 1000.
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, for senior secondary education, again the
USA
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 recorded the highest number of times, reaching around 1200
hours
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 meanwhile
Spain
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 and
Iceland
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 showed almost the same total
hours
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.
Japan
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's teachers spent only 700
hours
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 in their teaching.
Hence
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,
this
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 ends the report.
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