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TOPIC: Nowadays, some people like to give help to the local community or provide people with direct help. Other people prefer to give money to national and international organizations. Discuss both methods and give your own opinion on which is better.

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Nowadays, charities supply the foundation of many organizations and give help to needy
people
. There is debate on providing
people
 with direct help or donating it to national and international establishments. I completely agree with the latter statement as
this
 covers a large group of
people
 and help the whole community to reconstruct.  Direct helping indigent individuals is a fundamental charity
that is
 a financial help providing their livelihood. innumerable
people
 do not have a well-paid career or banking support from others and their livelihood is coming from other sources or donations.
This
 trend makes human beings lazy and dependent,
therefore
 they do not try to improve their circumstances.
For example
, Fetrieh, a type of
money
that is
 donated to needy
people
at the end
 of Ramadan month of Muslims, is a well-known charitable budget, that provides food and clothes for them, but it is not enough for them and temporarily fix their problem.
Subsequently
,
this
 type of charity is not sufficient and only solves the problem temporarily.
On the other hand
, substantial budgets donated to international establishments help them to invest in many fields of society that are important and available for a large group of
people
.
This
also
 motivates individuals to use their efforts to prosper and make
money
as well as
 improve their economic situation.
For instance
, payment of a large amount of
money
 by paying
money
 in a bank account for using the
money
 to erect a pediatric hospital can provide a medical centre to treat children.
Therefore
, Many children of different social groups can give medical care from
this
 charity.
To conclude
,
money
that is
 spent by international organizations and established for erecting social services has more effect on society.
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